The pic looks very sharp. Everything is delineated extremely cleanly and shows the form of the F-104 wonderfully. If you have specific critiques or questions regarding specific of the pic, ask. To me, it's really sharp considering the blue and grays of the aircraft itself raise photographic issues. You were lucky to see them in an air show, from reading, they've scaled back their actual show appearances.
A fellow I knew and unfortunately haven't kept in touch with knew Tom Delashaw who flew with them before he was killed in a Hawker Hunter crash and had a chance to fly in the 2-seater with Tom- It was an absolute thrill for him. Tom's death really also upset him- kind of like finding out there was no Santa Claus.